[Dragaera] Gift Shop

[Davdi Silverrock]

Submitted for your consideration:

It so chanced to transpire that my beloved and honourable parents
holidayed in Dragaera City at that cusp of History when the conflict
between Lord Adron e'Kieron and the Emperor Tortaalik resulted in said
city and its environs being dissolved and transformed into the Lesser
Sea of Chaos, and while my parents were indeed enormously fortunate in
being able to escape the Disaster with their lives, all that they were
able to procure for me as a memento of their visit to the doomed city
was this very shirt which you see before you; of cheap, lightweight
fabric, and truncated sleeves.
  --  A certain Gentleman of the House of the Hawk.

(Milord Dr. Whom -- would you be so kind as to proofread the above
paragraph, or we might say, sentence?  I am not entirely certain that
the grammar is in point of fact entirely proper.)