[Dragaera] Giddy T-shirt par-ergon

[Elizabeth Dalton]

I think the relationship is sort of part of the joke. Maybe "The 
writer's parents" or "the wearer's parents" or "the parents of the owner 
of this shirt," but I do like the wording that starts with "My" and ends 
with "shirt," even if it's not quite as Paarfi-esque.

Maybe I should re-read "How to write like Paarfi" for more tips. :)

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Bryan Newell wrote:

> How about not mentioning their relationship to the wearer of the shirt at
> all and let the reader make the connection themselves based on the
> underlying meme?  For example, "A pair of Hawklords in the twilight of life
> sought diversion from their diminishing duties and mounting cares by
> sojourning..."
> 
> Bryan

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Elizabeth Dalton
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