[Dragaera] Giddy T-shirt par-ergon
Philip Hart
philiph at slac.stanford.edu
Mon Jan 14 10:25:15 PST 2008
On Mon, 14 Jan 2008, Rick Castello wrote:
> I prefer the earlier versions that left out so much description
> about the parents' status in life...
>
> It feels like "diminishing duties and mounting cares", etc is a bit
> much to me and lessens the "punch".
That phrase was meant to play off something like "not yet in their 3kth
year" - maybe it's flabby alone.
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