[Dragaera] Gift Shop

[Steve Rapaport]

Nobody's asked for my opinion, but I like this one better than the others in
some ways -- I was always unhappy with the parenthetical details about the
food and holiday.

I'd modify it a little to sound less breathless though, and make it end with
"shirt" and start with "my parents":



> Submitted for your consideration:
>
> My beloved and honourable parents so chanced to be on
> holiday in Dragaera City, just at that cusp of History when the conflict
> between Lord Adron e'Kieron and the Emperor Tortaalik erupted into open
> rebellion, resulting in said
> city and its environs being dissolved and transformed into the Lesser
> Sea of Chaos. While my parents were indeed enormously fortunate in
> being able to escape the Disaster with their lives, all that they were
> able to procure for me as a memento of their visit to the doomed city
> was this cheap, lightweight garment with truncated sleeves which you do me
> the honour of observing; alas, a mere shirt.
>   --  A certain Gentleman of the House of the Hawk.
>
> (Milord Dr. Whom -- would you be so kind as to proofread the above
> paragraph, or we might say, sentence?  I am not entirely certain that
> the grammar is in point of fact entirely proper.)
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\Steve