[Dragaera] Striving towards Paarfiction...

[Rick Castello]

On Tue, January 15, 2008 5:10 pm, David Dyer-Bennet wrote:
> Davdi Silverrock wrote:

>> "[...] and while I am indeed glad that my parents had the good fortune
>> to escape the Disaster with their lives, they pretended that the only
>> token of their adventure they could do me the honor of providing me
>> was the plain and simple garment that you see before you,  [&c.]"
>>
>
> I do very much approve of including "pretended"; that's one of the
> memorable phrasings that Paarfi uses, and I'm glad to see it in this.  I
> think it should be kept with "due to to the haste of their departure",
> too.

     Agreed.  I missed that detail when I submitted my poor and humble
     edits for perusal.

     -Rick