[Dragaera] Striving towards Paarfiction...

Jon Lincicum lincicum at comcast.net
Wed Jan 16 10:37:09 PST 2008


 -------------- Original message ----------------------
From: "Davdi Silverrock" <davdisil at gmail.com>
> On Jan 15, 2008 4:37 PM, Rick Castello wrote:

[snip]
 
> I frown upon the phrasing that refers to the Disaster and then defines it.
> 
> Besides, my revision below is not only shorter, it is also exactly 100
> words long, and is therefore a drabble.  So.
> 
> 
> Rev Mk 19.ZZpluralZAlpha:
> 
> My esteemed mother and father traveled to Dragaera City for a holiday
> just at that crucial period in our history when the conflict between
> Lord Adron e'Kieron and the Emperor erupted into open rebellion,
> culminating in the explosion of raw amorphia that transformed the city
> and its environs into the Lesser Sea of Chaos.  While my parents had
> the good fortune to escape the Disaster with their lives, you perceive
> that the only token of their adventure I had the honor to receive was
> this plain shirt.
>  --  Two words from a certain Gentleman of the House of the Hawk.

Dragaerans have "Holy Days", but do they take "Holidays"?

Majikjon



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