[Dragaera] A Paarfict Storm

Scott Schultz scott at cjhunter.com
Mon Jan 21 11:46:51 PST 2008


>But more importantly, one might point out that a mere quibble is
>neither a better idea, nor is it an expression of unhappiness in no
>uncertain terms, and that therefore the most appropriate response in
>this specific instance is to echo the prior response of the noble
>Erzsébet of Catspirit Wood.

Excellent point. While I had been inclined to avoid muddying the water 
further, I'll suggest that "did themselves the honor" is better replaced 
with "had the honor" and leave it to the reader to imagine the various 
reasons why they embarked on the journey. That, IMO, would make it 
Practically Perfect in Every Way.







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