[Dragaera] Gift Shop

Diana diana.neat at gmail.com
Wed Jan 9 08:40:54 PST 2008


Highly nitpicky, I know, but somewhere in the process an extra space
was inserted between "you" and "see."

On Jan 9, 2008 10:34 AM, Scott Schultz <scott at cjhunter.com> wrote:
> Hmmm... minor re-write.
>
> It chanced to transpire that my esteemed and honored parents,
> in search of rest and diversion from their daily cares and duties,
> arrived in Dragaera City in at just that cusp in history when the
> conflict between Emperor Tortaalik and Lord Adron e'Kieron,
> the Dragon Heir, erupted into open rebellion; culminating in the
> dissolution of the city and its transformation into the Lesser Sea
> of Chaos, and, while I am grateful, indeed, that they escaped the
> Disaster with their lives, I was disappointed to learn that the only
> memento of the doomed city that they procured for me was this
> very plain and simple garment that you  see now before you, with
> its truncated sleeves and sadly cheap and lightweight fabric; a mere shirt.
>  --  A certain Gentleman of the House of the Hawk.
>
> The goal of this version being to emphasize the "vacation" and "my parents
> were willing to spend a bundle on themselves but couldn't be bothered to put
> any thought or money into a souvenier for me" aspects of the "lousy t-shirt"
> meme.
>
>
>
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