[Dragaera] Giddy T-shirt par-ergon

[Maximilian Wilson]

On Jan 12, 2008 5:55 PM, Davdi Silverrock <davdisil at gmail.com> wrote:
[snip]
> you, and which, you perceive, is made of cheap, lightweight fabric --
> a mere buttonless, collarless, short-sleeved shirt.
>  --  Two words from a certain Gentleman of the House of the Hawk.
>
> Um. I noticed that Cafepress has *long* sleeved T-shirts as well.
> Should I reword that final phrase?

Please do. There are too many adjectives in the shirt description. It
lacks the punch of some of the earlier versions.

-Max

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