[Dragaera] Dzur- Possible spoilers (A question of editing)
Johne Cook
johne.cook at gmail.com
Wed Aug 9 09:53:56 PDT 2006
On 8/9/06, Jon_Lincicum at stream.com <Jon_Lincicum at stream.com> wrote:
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> While the phrasing is, perhaps, a little clipped, it certainly makes sense
> to me. Would probably be a bit clearer if there was a hyphen after the
> "let's" and before the "etc", indicating a broken-off thought.
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> Majikjon
While I wasn't familiar with the symbol, based on the phrasing and the
cadence and the flow in context, I knew what he was about without
knowing. In my head, I interpreted it as 'and so forth'. It was a
repeating pattern. I thought it a clever touch.
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johne cook - wisconsin, usa
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