[Dragaera] Hyperintelligent blue...was:Re: Yuck
Jon Lincicum
lincicum at comcast.net
Mon May 14 12:59:12 PDT 2007
Very amusing! Full of all sorts of good references... Especially all the non-HHG ones. (Dirk Gently, Starship Titanic, Meaning of Liff, &c).
It's a very good song to use for this, as well.
I have just a couple of very minor nits to pick...
> Pile up by bistromathics
This should probably be Bistromathematics. Can it be made to fit the meter this way?
> Slartibartfast's picture in the ice,
It was his signature, not his picture. This is, perhaps, artistic license to fit the meter better?
> While battered sofas travel
I don't remember the sofa being "battered", it was just a Chesterfield. I could be misremembering. In any case I was hoping for a reference to "Eddies in the Space-Time Continuum!" ;-)
> Inside all the stories that you told
> Beats an ever-living Heart of Gold.
> And our affection
> Returns in your direction
> We're gonna miss you for the longest time.
Very nice ending.
Majikjon
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