[Dragaera] Striving towards Paarfiction...

[Davdi Silverrock]

On Jan 14, 2008 11:48 AM, Elizabeth Dalton wrote:
> shapeless->untailored? unfitted?
>
> I find "tube" distracting, but perhaps that's just me.
>

Hm.  We can go tubeless...

"was the simple garment that you see before you, which, you perceive,
is of sadly cheap and common fabric, and an untailored, buttonless,
collarless design that slides closely over the torso and arms, mocking
their shape: this very shirt."

Too long?  Lacking punch?  Can has punch?