[Dragaera] Striving towards Paarfiction...

[Davdi Silverrock]

On Jan 14, 2008 1:38 PM, Philip Hart wrote:
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> On Mon, 14 Jan 2008, Davdi Silverrock wrote:
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> > is of sadly cheap and common fabric and untailored, buttonless,
> > collarless design
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> "Cheap and common" might be just "common", which would solve the
> "of (a and b) and c" issue above.  Another approach, via French
> I think, would be "of a and b and of c".
>

I think we may need the comma back again - perhaps like so?

"is of sadly cheap and common fabric, and of untailored, buttonless,
collarless design"