[Dragaera] Striving towards Paarfiction...

Mark Tiller mtiller at ntlworld.com
Mon Jan 14 15:21:32 PST 2008


" and while I am indeed glad that my parents had the good fortune to escape
the Disaster with their lives"

Could/should that be 

" and whilst I am indeed glad that my parents had the good fortune to escape
the Disaster with their lives"

I dunno, I think whilst flows better

MArk





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