[Dragaera] Striving towards Paarfiction...

[Elizabeth Dalton]

Davdi Silverrock wrote:

> Rev Mk 19.ZZpluralZAlpha:
> 
> My esteemed mother and father traveled to Dragaera City for a holiday
> just at that crucial period in our history when the conflict between
> Lord Adron e'Kieron and the Emperor erupted into open rebellion,
> culminating in the explosion of raw amorphia that transformed the city
> and its environs into the Lesser Sea of Chaos.  While my parents had
> the good fortune to escape the Disaster with their lives, you perceive
> that the only token of their adventure I had the honor to receive was
> this plain shirt.
>  --  Two words from a certain Gentleman of the House of the Hawk.

I suggest "unremarkable" rather than "plain." I like the irony of Paarfi 
remarking on the unremarkable.

And possibly a comma after "holiday," but I defer to Dr. Whom and/or 
other grammarians in this regard.

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