[Dragaera] Almost Paarfict?

[Philip Hart]

On Thu, 17 Jan 2008, Davdi Silverrock wrote:

> unremarkable garment of sadly cheap and common fabric you now see
> before you, which, you perceive, is merely some sort of shirt.

I dislike garment/shirt - the latter word wouldn't be a discovery to
the speaker following the former.  If you call it an 
unremarkably-decorated piece of thin common fabric that can be 
perceived to be some sort of shirt, you preserve the surprise of
the last word.