[Dragaera] Tiassa (spoilers)

Damien Sullivan phoenix at ugcs.caltech.edu
Sat Apr 16 09:45:09 PDT 2011


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> I hardly think that counts.  I've been meaning to note that I found
> no typos, not at all the case with the last n Texts.  Maybe somebody
> ran this one past Davdi, though surely there would be fewer cracks
> in that case.

I didn't notice word typos, but I think there's three desynchronized
conversations.  That is, 
"line"
"line"
"line"
etc

where eventually the speakers have gotten out of order.  This seems to
be happening more and more as the series progress.

I really enjoyed reading the book, especially the style play, but the
ending was kind of abrupt, and it's an odd work to look back on.  Sethra
and Devera at the beginning, then Piro, Sara and Savn at the end.  I'm
not sure it goes anywhere, or rather anywhere specific, just corkscrews
a lot dropping hints and changes along the way.

One big change: Vlad desiring a relationship with a Dragaeran, vs.
considering it bestiality.

As for previous discussion, I'm not sure why most of the Good Guys would
*want* to find Vlad at this point, nor would they do so just because
Khaavren wanted to find Vlad.

-xx- Damien X-) 



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