[Dragaera] some comments on _The Incrementalists_

[Steve Rapaport]

>> 5. Some of the handling of the developing friendship and romance ("Ren
> > laughed, and my heart flipped--flopped") seemed a bit telling not
> showing,
> > though actually it probably wasn't.  Maybe I don't feel enough of a sense
> > of Ren's personality.
> >
> > Agreed. Falling in love within 24 hours as Phil and Ren do is really hard
> > to believe but can be pulled off.  SEE True Romance, or the first episode
> > of six Feet under. I don't think the incrementalists succeeded.
>
> I disagree.   This was artificially created by someone who was very good
> at manipulating emotions.


Ren's end may have been.  I don't think Phil was nudged.

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\Steve