[Dragaera] Striving towards Paarfiction...

[Maximilian Wilson]

On Jan 14, 2008 11:24 PM, Davdi Silverrock <davdisil at gmail.com> wrote:
> Would you recommend striking "tunic" and shortening it to:
>
> "was the plain and simple garment that you see before you, which, you
> perceive, is short, bland, buttonless, and of sadly cheap and common
> fabric: this very shirt."

I like this version. It avoids adding an extra clause and yet manages
to express extreme distaste for the simplicity of the lousy T-shirt.

-Max

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"The presentation or 'gift' of the Holy Ghost simply confers upon a
man the right to receive at any time, when he is worthy of it and
desires it, the power and light of truth of the Holy Ghost, although
he may often be left to his own spirit and judgment." --Joseph F.
Smith (manual, p. 69)

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Be witty if you can,
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