[Dragaera] Giddy T-shirt par-ergon

[Rick Castello]

On Mon, January 14, 2008 12:15 pm, Davdi Silverrock wrote:
> On Jan 14, 2008 11:53 AM, Rick Castello wrote:
>>
>> On Mon, January 14, 2008 11:20 am, Davdi Silverrock wrote:
>
>> > Is this better? :
>> >
>> > My esteemed mother and father traveled to Dragaera City in search of
>> > diversion, and sojourned there at no small expense (enjoying tolerably
>> > fine meals and entertainments), (&c)

> Hm, I think I can even unparenthetize it:
>
> My esteemed mother and father traveled to Dragaera City in search of
> diversion, and sojourned there at no small expense, enjoying the
> city's tolerably fine meals and entertainments, just at that crucial
> point in our history when, in addition to unrest and uprisings in the
> city (&c)

     I dare say I find this version to be tolerably punctuated.

     Parentheses:  DOES NOT WANT

     -Rick