[Dragaera] Striving towards Paarfiction...

[Davdi Silverrock]

On Jan 14, 2008 4:38 PM, Maximilian Wilson wrote:

>
> A picture is worth a thousand words--ambiguity is not going to be a
> problem given that the shirt is right there. You could merely say
> "garment" and the viewer would pick up on the joke. Are you trying to
> describe the shirt without self-reference, as if it were a quote in
> the book which had been later, ironically, printed on a shirt?
>

Well, you do have a point there.  I think I have been trying much too hard.

But what do you think of the latest revision?  18 or 18a?