[Dragaera] Striving towards Paarfiction...

[Philip Hart]

On Wed, 16 Jan 2008, Davdi Silverrock wrote:

> and while I am indeed glad that my parents had the good fortune to
> escape the Disaster with their lives, they pretended

Here there's no logical flow between "I am glad" and "they pretended"
in the absence of the "disappointed" phrase.  I think this requires 
"I must note that" before the latter phrase.


It's pretty hard to keep up.