[Dragaera] Almost Paarfict?

[Erzsébet of Catspirit Wood]

Davdi Silverrock wrote:

> Revision Mk. 25:
...
> adventure they could do me the honor of presenting to me was this
> unremarkable garment of sadly cheap and common fabric you now see
> before you, which, you perceive, is merely some sort of shirt.
>  --  Two words from a certain Gentleman of the House of the Hawk.
> 

I think "which, you perceive, is a mere shirt." would have more punch
than "some sort of shirt." But I'm glad "torso" isn't in there anymore.

-- 
Erzsébet of Catspirit Wood
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