[Dragaera] Almost Paarfict?

[Howard Brazee]

Rick Castello wrote:
>      Better, but same comment as before... too long, even for Paarfi.
>
>      Consider our source:
>      "My parents went to neat place and all I got was this lousy t-shirt"
>
>      In many ways, the "punch" of a phrase or bit comes from squeezing
>      power into conciseness.  Obviously, Paarfi wouldn't be concise,
>      but the concept of refining and focusing maximal strength of humor
>      in the bit is still useful.
>
>      I find the shorter versions of earlier to be much more amusing,
>      while still getting the Paarfi across.
>
>      My own two words, your mileage may vary.
>
>      -Rick
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I agree, it's tough to find a balance.    It is interesting to note on 
how much time and effort goes into making a paragraph like this.   If we 
had to do it for a living, we would be pretty hungry - and our fans 
would be pretty impatient.