[Dragaera] A more Paarfict union (of words)?

Rick Castello rick at punk.net
Fri Jan 18 16:22:32 PST 2008


On Fri, January 18, 2008 1:34 pm, Davdi Silverrock wrote:
> Another multi-reply:
>
> On Jan 17, 2008 4:32 PM, Philip Hart wrote:
>>
>> On Thu, 17 Jan 2008, Davdi Silverrock wrote:
>>
>> > "the unfortunate timing of their sojourn led to its interruption"
>>
>> Not sure about "led to".  "Resulted in"?  "Their ill-timed sojourn
>> was interrupted"?
>
> Or perhaps, "the unfortunate timing of their sojourn was shown by its
> interruption".

     Or: "at no small expense but with unfortunate timing, for it was
     interrupted by..."

     -Rick



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