[Dragaera] Giddy T-shirt par-ergon

Philip Hart philiph at slac.stanford.edu
Mon Jan 14 10:25:15 PST 2008



On Mon, 14 Jan 2008, Rick Castello wrote:

>     I prefer the earlier versions that left out so much description
>     about the parents' status in life...
>
>     It feels like "diminishing duties and mounting cares", etc is a bit
>     much to me and lessens the "punch".

That phrase was meant to play off something like "not yet in their 3kth 
year" - maybe it's flabby alone.



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