[Dragaera] Striving towards Paarfiction...

[Philip Hart]

On Mon, 14 Jan 2008, Elizabeth Dalton wrote:

> in a 10x10 square, but I like the punch of this conclusion:
>
> "was the simple garment that you see before you, which, you perceive,
> is of sadly cheap and common fabric, and an untailored, buttonless,
> collarless design: this very shirt."

"is of foo, and an abar" doesn't work for me.  I think dropping the comma
and "an" helps.